Could some one look over this essay and give me some pointers and some insight i need 5 more pages :-(?

Wow, that was a lot of reading. Although, I did read all of it and I will try to give you a little more help. You could talk about if they were to just make smoking illegal alltogether like they have many drugs illegal. Also, how much of the profits should have to go on healthcare. Also, how it is becoming more and more a freedom issue. You have a lot of very good points and Maybe you could talk about how smokers feel they are being punished and there rights as a U.S. citizen are being taken away but at the same time, you can go anywhere and buy them. Maybe you could talk about if certain gas station chains, grocery store chains and places like wal-mart would just quit selling them. Then go to talk about some of the effects that would have positively on everyone. It is hard to quit and a lot of that is so many people do it and they are everywhere it could help people who are trying to quit just by having places they could go and not be so readily available.