Wednesday, November 9, 2011

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In our area of Central Missouri there are many interesting places to visit. One of those include the World's Largest Titanic Museum, located in Branson. When you first enter you will receive a boarding p that will include the name of one of the 2,200 pagens a board the vogue. As you walk threw a guided tour one room you will enter is the Memorial room, hanging in the middle of the room is a life vest worn by Madeleine Astor. This is the only known life vest that can be linked to the Titanic in existence. You will also be able to view a gl panel with the names of the survivors on one side and victims of that tragic night on the other. You will have the chance to see if you were following the footsteps of a survivor, or tracing the footsteps of a victims ghostly trail. This may not be the only interesting place to visit in Central Missouri, but is one of the most fascinating and desirable.

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